[ SECRET POST #4612 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4612 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Writing Questions

[(Anonymous)]

Finding out someone who was a shit to you when you were kids is in gaol, and specifically seeking them out (a very literally captive audience) just to go "Nyer nyer, look, you're in prison and I'm doing things with myself that don't involve the phrase 'bend over and cough', sucks to be you," would be... very hard to sell sympathetically.

Visiting your shitty cousin Mike in prison and going "Gee Mike, it sure is a shame that your parents refusal to punish you for all the heinous things you did as a kid turned you into an adult who's going to be in and out of prison forever,"... might work?

But why does the main character have to confront them anyway? "You have no power over me, that's why I took time out of my week to come see you"? Why no just let them know the other person is in prison, have the main character think about visiting them to gloat, and think better of it?

AYRT

[(Anonymous)]

I decided to have it set at a family reunion instead. Good points there.