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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2019-08-22 06:49 pm

[ SECRET POST #4612 ]


⌈ Secret Post #4612 ⌋

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Re: Writing Questions

(Anonymous) 2019-08-23 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
It does sound a little pathetic, yeah. I know you said in later comments that you're thinking of changing it to a family reunion instead of prison but the new setting doesn't really make it not-pathetic. It's the confrontation itself. It's every bullied victim's trite fantasy, but most people either manage their trauma on their own or grow out of the need to rehash something that happened to them in childhood.

Or more realistically, they understand that you can't really go back and relive that moment and make it better. Life just isn't that tidy, it doesn't usually offer that level of closure and justice wrapped up in a big red bow. So I guess it depends on whether or not you want this story and this character to sound real, or if you're just writing revenge fantasy wish fulfillment stuff.

AYRT

(Anonymous) 2019-08-23 02:55 am (UTC)(link)
I've decided I might not write it at all, tbh The more I think about it the more its like "naaaaah"