[ SECRET POST #4650 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4650 ⌋

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

In my experience, it can be tricky to do it right. A lot of beginners write it instinctively in a very "Hi, my name is [character name] and I'm a slender sixteen year old girl with long, silver hair", etc. etc. sort of way. It feels very forced and artificial.

But when done well, it can be amazing how intimately it brings the reader into the story. It's just that few people can write it well.