[ SECRET POST #682 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #682 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

When all we know about you are your words, you might want to spell them right. It's like going out in public with your pants on backwards -- people notice, even if most of them don't say anything.

But hey, if you don't like criticism of nothing but your spelling, here's some more:

In the first paragraph, you went from "he or she" to "him/her". You probably should have gone with "him or her," but if you really want the other form, use it throughout.

In the second paragraph, "him/her's adventures" isn't how you want to say that. You wouldn't say him (or him's) adventures, and you really shouldn't say her's adventures. If you insist on the slash, it's "his/her adventures", if you don't want to do that, his or her adventures. In general, you can use "their" for the singular when you don't know gender, which would make a lot of this easier.

In the third paragraph, you've got "a time where people". You want to have, "a time when people".

Did you see what I did there? I "attacked" your grammar, rather than your spelling. Well, I guess I attacked your spelling a bit, as "her's" isn't a word. But I didn't only mock your spelling.

--AJ