[ SECRET POST #4836 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4836 ⌋

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I think the books lacked 2 things; a reason for magic to exist and Voldemort's endgame.

I've seen fics put more effort into going "this is where magic came from and why purebloods were intent on defending their right to have it only be them."

Like HeartofAspen's This Too is Sacred: https://archiveofourown.org/works/17593790/chapters/41471165

Or EnigmanticRose's The Brightest Black: https://archiveofourown.org/works/6237706/chapters/14292628

Both Hermione/Draco fics... that's my corner.

Yeah, okay, Harry had a personal stake b/c Volde was trying to kill him. Same with Hermione, she's a muggleborn. They want to kill her. So, Ron should have been the Pureblood viewpoint/voice. And... he wasn't. Sirius could have been that too. But.. again, he wasn't. So, yeah, what was the end goal, what would it do to magic if Voldemort succeeded. Why are the families important. Those are the conflicts/stakes that really after book 4 she needed that development editor for and didn't have.

I'm reading a lot of indie right now, and LOTS of books need that development edit. Someone to push the writer to answer those big questions. I'm not surprised fandom takes that next step especially if the book is already halfway there.

[(Anonymous)]

1) Nonnie, I love you, as that ship was my gateway drug and Hermione eventually became my fandom bicycle, but I digress...bless up for those recs... (I will gladly take any more you have, and I'll admit lately time travel fics with her meeting a young Tom Riddle are my jam)

2) It's really interesting to ask those questions, and a s a reader, I think there were moments where those questions popped up, but there was so much happening they were pushed aside. I really like the idea of exploring things that were only hinted at.

3) I'm curious as what you're reading. You sound like your make a good editor, or I the very least someone who I might send work to for feedback! What else are you reading?

[(Anonymous)]

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Aww, blush, nonnie. I err, keep a bunch of Draniome finished fics from AO3.

Rewriting Destiny by MayaWrites95 is a good time travel story. https://archiveofourown.org/works/13232688/chapters/30268506

Anything by SenYinLu or Rainsrabble is generally good. Out of Hand by Kittenshift is funny. https://archiveofourown.org/works/11730543/chapters/26430156

One way to look at fanfiction is as editing, like development editing. And it's the fun type that gives us free things to read!

To answer #3, I'm part of the indie author community on twitter, so I've been reading indie SFF books. (I started a booktube.) If you like SFF, so far I can recommend for YA Magical Realism, Rebecca M. Horner's Sun's Guard: Ten. For Dnd Adventures: Sean R. Frazier's Call of Chaos. Fanfiction style biker werewolf adventures, Ginny O.'s Heaven's Heathens series. And for nerdy scifi: Lindsey Buroker. (Though, she has tons of books.) If I get more of a following on my channel/twitter, I might offer development editing. But that really requires a reach I don't have.

It's currently indieapril, so if you search that hashtag on twitter, you'll find LOTs of threads of people advertising their books.

[meadowphoenix]

i mean, i don't understand why those things were necessary. like what is anybody's stake in superiority and power, lmao.

[(Anonymous)]

usually control driven often by fear. Something only peripherally addressed in the series due to Harry's limited omniscient viewpoint. But not knowing how magic works, or why it exists, I can only come up with a bunch of theories as to what Voldemort was going to do if he won or if there was a bigger endgame to control magic and how it manifested.

Most of fandom agrees that it was going to be dystopian levels of bad though.

Big stake: "the magical world ends as we know it"

Epic stake: "Magic is destroyed completely."

It's framing and tension, imo. Almost anything would have been better than half a book of camping.

[meadowphoenix]

oh, okay, I think where I disagree is that there's a missing part considering the scope. what we get as an endgame is authoritarian rule of the magical uk, which considering that we never seriously get away from the uk makes the stakes appropriate to all actors involved, including purebloods on both sides. it's weird to me to think that purebloods like ron don't have a motivation here. the conflict voldemort uses is an extant conflict already visible with the hogwarts founders. that conflict is already relevant to the magical britain voldemort is born into, and it already has a context (muggle witch hunting) which makes sense to have been the beginning but not a lasting impetus. the framing follows the endgame completely, and I'm not sure what adding post-win would have done, beyond raise the stakes in a way that necessitated expanding the scope of the books to outside britain...which isn't foundational, imo.

frankly, the fic from GOF on was amazing with expanding the scope beyond the uk, but i'm betting that it doesn't feel like you're missing something if you read those books 1-7 without interacting with fandom. i can completely understand preferring the larger fic takes tho.