[ SECRET POST #4969 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4969 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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[Gank Your Heart]


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[final fantasy xiv]


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[Star Trek: Deep Space Nine]


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(Final Fantasy XIV)


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[Harry Styles, "Watermelon Sugar"]


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[The Untamed/MZDS]


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 01 pages, 12 secrets from Secret Submission Post #711.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

OP

[(Anonymous)]

Yeah, you're right about AO3. I wish everyone would get on it, even the writers I'm not going to read. Just knowing I could see everything and use the filters to go through it would make things easier.

You make some good points. I don't know how accurate my judgement is for age anymore. After I made this secret I was struggling through a very juvenile tropey fic and one of the author notes was apologising for a delayed update because one of their kids was sick. I was like whaaaat. Clicked on their profile and they listed their age as 30 something. I did not see that coming. From the way they write sex I assumed they'd never had any. :/

Re: OP

[(Anonymous)]

AYRT - Out of curiosity, would you say it’s the tropes themselves that ping as juvenile and “bad writing” to you? Or is it more in how the tropes are handled?

I ask because, personally, I quite like tropey fanfic, and will give a lot of tropes a fair bit of leeway. Like, yes, the one bed trope is quite juvenile, really. Most adults wouldn’t freak out if they had to share a bed for a night with someone they 1. knew well, and 2. were attracted to. They might have a little internal bit of a moment over it, but ultimately it wouldn’t really be a big deal for most adults, I don’t think. But I’m there for the shippiness, so I’m willing to go along with the trope and let the author milk it for all the UST it’s worth if that’s their wont. (I’m 32, for context.)

Hell, I can sometimes even enjoy the most egregious of juvenile tropes: the spin the bottle trope, and the truth or dare trope. If the writing is otherwise solid (good pacing, the writer tries to make it as in character as possible and does a decent job of it under the circumstances, etc) I can usually roll with it, even though, in my experience, both of those games are rarely played by adults.

What really pings as bad writing and/or juvenile writing, to me, is when the SPaG is weak, the set-up is flimsy or non-existent, the pacing is wobbly, and the characterizations are very generic or wildly inaccurate. Basically, to me, juvenile writing doesn’t bother to set up or earn anything, or is very perfunctory about it. It’s clunky and oblivious. It’s just like, “I want the character(s) to be doing [thing], so I’m going to write them doing [thing].” No set up. No structure. Like icing without cake.

Re: OP

[(Anonymous)]

Definitely how the tropes are handled!

I will read anything from super serious angst to silly "oops we got magically stuck together" stories. If it's done well I can get into it.

The pacing is important. This particular author just wanted them to be married with babies ASAP and bulldozed the mildly interesting premise to achieve that. They also kept describing exactly what everyone was wearing.

Icing without the cake is a great way to put it!