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[ SECRET POST #750 ]
⌈ Secret Post #750 ⌋
Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.
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(Anonymous) 2009-01-24 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)-The setting is shoddily put together in terms of visual design. Buildings, clothing, geography and the even the overall color palette give nothing specially unique or idiosyncratic to the story. It lacks personality.
-Flowery prose and empty metaphors. People in real life don't talk every single one of them with the same ham-fisted language and abuse of relevant but rather from-the-left-field language tricks. It's fine when a character uses such a language as it gives him or her a unique personality, but when every single character uses the same kind of expressions and body language there is not a lot of room for individualism.
-The protagonists lack of action through the entire first half makes this second half rather unsatisfying. It's impossible to feel the meaning behind Ishu's rebellion when whatever medium she had to execute it in episode 23 she had since episode 1.
-The idea of "problems inherent to human communication" that was supposed to tie-up the entire narrative and give the actions some kind of emotional meaning comes across as mere coat-painting.
-Lack of proper build-up. Events that should change our perception of the entire narrative come across as just there rather than as properly climatic.
So you're probably just watching bad shows.
Re: 114
(Anonymous) 2009-01-24 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)Re: 114
(Anonymous) 2009-01-24 10:33 pm (UTC)(link)And I am still unsure why pointing out the obvious flaws in Xam'd is trolling.
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(Anonymous) 2009-01-24 10:42 pm (UTC)(link)....GhostNia?
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(Anonymous) 2009-01-24 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)