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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2021-04-15 04:08 pm

[ SECRET POST #5214 ]


⌈ Secret Post #5214 ⌋

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Re: Whyyyy/For your current venting needs

(Anonymous) 2021-04-16 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
AYRT

:( Oh dear.

They wrote Segway instead of segue. Which I can understand,but there's gratuitous adjective usage throughout the story..."let's sprinkle a little 'jubilant' here and 'solidarity' there (yes, that's a noun, but it was not the noun that should have been used)" drone. Someone gave you a thesaurus. But that's a gift given to you once you've mastered the dictionary.

The basic errors I've come to overlook at this point. But some are just so egregious that it takes me right the fuck out :|

I'm already 30+ chapters in. It's too late to turn back now.