[ SECRET POST #5283 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5283 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 01 pages, 15 secrets from Secret Submission Post #755.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

Re: Secrets you don't want to make...

[(Anonymous)]

"I hate omegaverse but-" or "I'd like this smutty oneshot more if it wasn't so focused on sex".

I feel like these are kind of different sentiments

Re: Secrets you don't want to make...

[(Anonymous)]

MTE! "I usually hate omegaverse but this was great!" is absolutely a compliment. In some ways it's actually a higher compliment because the person is telling you your writing was so good it overcame their preexisting bias against a particular trope.

The other is just a complaint, and a nonsensical one at that. It's possible what they're trying to say is that, in their opinion, you jump straight into the porn without even the bare minimum of set-up that would make things feel cohesive. The vast majority of smutty one-shots still benefit from at least a tiny bit of set-up to establish scene and circumstance, IMO. But if that is what they're trying to say, 1. they're saying it badly, and 2. they should probably be keeping their criticism to themselves unless you asked for it.