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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2022-04-02 03:52 pm
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[ SECRET POST #5566 ]


⌈ Secret Post #5566 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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(Anonymous) 2022-04-02 08:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Holy shit, that's genius.
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[personal profile] feotakahari 2022-04-02 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
A literal description of what’s happening onscreen could very easily be Insert Rod A Into Hole B. So even if you didn’t invent the movements, you at least described it passionately enough to be enjoyable.

(Anonymous) 2022-04-02 08:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Tab A was then inserted into slot B at a perpindickular angle....

(Anonymous) 2022-04-03 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
Respect.

(Anonymous) 2022-04-02 10:06 pm (UTC)(link)
MTE. It's not the obvious facts of what's physically happening that make a smut scene good. It's everything else.

(Anonymous) 2022-04-02 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
yea no one's going to reinvent the wheel when it comes to sex or even sex scenes. i guess stealing dialogue could be actually cheating in some way, but even then if the scene isn't hot dirty talk is just cringe

(Anonymous) 2022-04-02 11:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Right? Pretty sure they described it better than that.

(Anonymous) 2022-04-02 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
...OK

(Anonymous) 2022-04-02 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
This is such a funny secret

OP thinks they've somehow gotten one over on their friend by.... being a good writer

(Anonymous) 2022-04-02 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Agreed. Unless they described it like a Wikipedia movie plot, there had to be some creative ability.

(Anonymous) 2022-04-03 05:43 am (UTC)(link)
This

(Anonymous) 2022-04-02 11:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, that's one way to avoid the "oh shit, did I give him an extra hand? Now which way are they facing?" problem.

(Anonymous) 2022-04-02 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Now I just feel confused when I'm reading when people start getting too detailed about positions and where hands and arms are and if they're facing the same way, etc.

If you managed to explain that in a clear and concise manner throughout different point of the the smut, I'll have to say you're already about 35% of the way there. And I guess looking at "models" of what was going on was helpful with that at least?
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