[ SECRET POST #5596 + 5597 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5596 + 5597 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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Notes:

Long one because I'll be away for a day again!

Secrets Left to Post: 00 pages, 00 secrets from Secret Submission Post #800.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[wingedcatgirl]

We glanced through them all a while ago when this story was new. Some of them very obviously need more thorough editing than most people would be comfortable doing to the works of a beloved dead author, some of them seem like they would be easy fixes. (The three you put on the bottom all fell into that second category.) But we were able to spot something iffy in all of them.

Like there's nothing wrong with the premise of Mulberry Street ("I saw a bunch of cool weird stuff today, whoa"), but it's just packed full of weird stereotypes and would need a complete redo of the second half to actually get them all out.