[ SECRET POST #5799 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5799 ⌋

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Comments

[fscom]

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[(Anonymous)]

I thought it was absolutely beautifully written but different strokes

[(Anonymous)]

I loved it right up until the ending. I legit wanted to toss the book right off my balcony.

[sparklywalls]

I really enjoyed it but I remember being slightly "disappointed" in that everyone always talks about the house being a main character and I wanted MORE of the house. I don't mean loads of backstory or tedious exposition, I can't explain it but that was my end thought "needs even more house."

[(Anonymous)]

That's how I felt when I read the book too.

[(Anonymous)]

I've heard several people have that reaction, so you're not alone.

[(Anonymous)]

I didn't like it either. But "The Lottery" slaps.

[meadowphoenix]

I think it made it really clear the main character is ripe for a breakdown before she gets to the house, in a way that wouldn't have been as effective in 3rd person omniscient.

but it's very daydreamy writing