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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2023-12-24 04:39 pm

[ SECRET POST #6197 ]


⌈ Secret Post #6197 ⌋

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(Anonymous) 2023-12-25 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
I think you can pull off unreliable narrators with third person free indirect discourse type things. You do have to work at it a little more. But I think when done well, I actually prefer it to 1st person unreliable narrator.
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[personal profile] meadowphoenix 2023-12-25 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
haha, i disagree completely. i never get more annoyed at self-deluding characters than in third indirect. there's too much author in that. where have you seen it work well?