[ SECRET POST #6396 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #6396 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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[Blue Eye Samurai]



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[The Goblin Emperor]



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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Thesaurus abuse almost always seems to me to be covering up a lack of substance (see: Cat Valente, Benjanun Sriduangkaew) but in the case of the Goblin Emperor she had a perfectly good story, she just threw all this unnecessary glitter on the top.

[(Anonymous)]

She kinda didn't, though.

[(Anonymous)]

Eh, it was more than enough to entertain me. I'm not claiming it's the best thing ever.

[(Anonymous)]

I disagree on the grounds that I never noticed anything off about the language in The Goblin Emperor. The prose flowed naturally for me (in contrast with authors like Valente), which I take as an indication that Addison wasn't throwing glitter on her story, but instead using vocabulary suited to the story she was telling.