[ SECRET POST #6872 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #6872 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Things that take you out of the story

[iff_and_xor]

Things like that, where it feels like the author is awkwardly trying to make some point and clumsily presents it as characterization. I think I mind it less when it’s in first person. I’m fine with a character directly telling me some fact they learned or opinion they have.