[ SECRET POST #1329 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #1329 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Secrets Left to Post: 07 pages, 168 secrets from Secret Submission Post #190.
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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Wow. You have a grammar error or two every sentence or so in this secret. You should attempt to learn how to write in English at a proficient level on your own instead of depending so heavily on betas. I thought the point of a beta was the catch the few odd mistakes, not write for you, which is what they have to be doing if this is your normal caliber of writing.

Perhaps without the safety blanket of an amazing beta you can begin to catch your own (very numerous) mistakes.

[(Anonymous)]

I see only three errors in the whole thing.

-"recs' post" - unless you're talking about the posts of somebody named recs, it should probably be "rec posts".
-"few comments" instead of "a few comments" (which, dear OP, actually changes the meaning to the opposite of what you were trying to say!)
-"lazy around" -- not sure what to make of that; you probably meant "laze around."

[maskitheclown.livejournal.com]

Well, there's also:
"somehow decent" instead of "somewhat decent"
"I have grammar mistakes"
"I always say this"
"post a journal"
"anymore"
"oh my dear" sans comma
"even when we" instead of "even though we"

Because I'm anal like that.

[(Anonymous)]

...try as I might I seriously can't see anything wrong with the ones that you didn't explicitly explain. They all sound like perfectly correct things to say.

[maskitheclown.livejournal.com]

- "Grammatical errors" would have been ideal, "grammatical mistakes" not too bad. Also, adding pretty much anything between "have" and "grammar" would have been better. "I have too many 'grammar' mistakes" for instance.
- "I always say/mention that/it" not "this" (not that "this" doesn't have its place. But not in a sentence like "They should have closed the door, I told them this." It is used of course, much like the "grammar" thing, but it's wrong.)
- ridiculous as it is, you post a post, on your journal. Or a journal entry, on your journal.
- anymore (there's actually a debate about this one, I just belong to the school of "that's not a word!")

*I know this is just a secret post and I'm not saying it had to be perfect, just answering the question because I was bored :)
** Yeah, I'm sure this comment is full of mistakes too :)