[ SECRET POST #1374 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #1374 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Comments

[lovegonnadrown.livejournal.com]

...panelling, layouts, etc =/= writing, anon, sorry to say.

Also if a comic is meant to be at least somewhat serious you kind of NEED character development. HINABN definitely falls under that category.

You don't have to "hate" something to have valid criticisms of it. I personally like HINABN, but... I gotta be honest. It's not that great. The art is wonderful but she's got a lot of problems that she needs to work out.

You should check out Scott McCloud's books on the subject, Understanding Comics, Making Comics, etc... Comics are such an amazing and interesting medium and they're so much fun to learn about!

[lizzyborden711.livejournal.com]

IAWTC

Her problems really make it hard for me to pin a lot of hope on seeing this story finished. Many other webcomic artists have talked publicly about their panic/anxiety/depression issues (i think its a somewhat common issue in the career, there's reasons to be attracted to a job that involves being alone a lot of the time), but they chose an update schedule and they made it work.

i started liking the series a lot more as soon as i started thinking of it as pretty art with an obscured story line and less a webcomic.

OP

[(Anonymous)]

C&Ping from another reply: I think that visual storytelling is given really short shrift. If, say, a webcomic had an amazing plot but the artist simply couldn't convey an action sequence in a coherent manner - because of panelling issues, not just art style - then I think that counts as poor comic writing. It's like having a novel with a great plot but awful prose.

I definitely agree that HINABN is far from perfect, and that valid criticism is a good thing, but I don't know, there were some secrets about it that just seemed really ragey.