[ SECRET POST #1475 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #1475 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 14 pages, 349 secrets from Secret Submission Post #211.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 1 - broken links ], [ 1 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ], [ 1 2 - posted twice ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[fairhearing.livejournal.com]

No, it doesn't. You as a writer, writing it out every time, assume this to be the case. A reader's brain, reading, registers names (and dialogue tags, incidentally, e.g. "said") as punctuation. Whereas an epithet interrupts the reader's steady processing of the narrative like a bump in the road.

Actually, specifying who's talking or doing stuff in the narrative is needed a lot less often than people assume. Written skillfully, a story will take care of 90% of that with just the character's voices and with careful control over the level of free indirect discourse (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_indirect_speech).

This is one of the most common mistakes writers make. Even published writers.

+1 to infinity

[sai_salamander]

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