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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2011-01-16 04:30 pm

[ SECRET POST #1475 ]


⌈ Secret Post #1475 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 14 pages, 349 secrets from Secret Submission Post #211.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 1 - broken links ], [ 1 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ], [ 1 2 - posted twice ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

[identity profile] fairhearing.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
No, it's professional writing. The pros use. Pick up any book.

O, that we might someday hope to reach the vaunted prosaic levels of ALAN DEAN FOSTER

I'm trying not to sound like an insufferable snob up ins, honestly, but please do ME a favor and pick up The Art of Fiction (http://www.amazon.com/Art-Fiction-Notes-Craft-Writers/dp/0679734031) by John Gardner. And then please skip to the "common errors" chapter, where this, along with a lot of other really well-meaning techniques writers use once they start actually thinking about the words that they're putting to paper and how they might be being received, is presented in a way that makes you suddenly understand "oh, wait a second, it's true, I actually DO never notice when the author repeats 'said' nine hundred times per page."

just please do so because this is really hurting me ;n;
Edited 2011-01-17 05:13 (UTC)