[ SECRET POST #1870 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #1870 ⌋


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Comments

[van.livejournal.com]

I wish I could have ignored it, but it was a distraction to me from page one. It wouldn't take long to reread a small sampling to notice it. I got used to it after a while, for the most part, but it definitely started me out on the wrong foot with regards to how OMG AMAZING the book was touted to be.

[lit-wolf.livejournal.com]

Okay, I reread the first chapter or so and I still don't see this bad writing. Sentence fragments? Yes, but I like them in a first person narrative because it's coming from a character's thoughts, a character's POV. I can't speak for everyone but I know I think a lot in sentence fragments. I look out the window in the morning to judge the weather and think, 'Dark clouds. Might storm. Should grab an umbrella, just in case.' So that's fine with me. And, even so, it wasn't like the entire thing was littered with sentence fragments. Is one or two per paragraph really that much? I've read stuff with a lot more and still wasn't bothered by it.

Now 'The Time Traveler's Wife'? That one drove me up the fucking wall. Every other line written in that damn book was a sentence fragment, some of which didn't even make any sense. Or they were run on sentences that were three or four lines long. That was a book I nearly put down because of the writing... and the story... and the characters... I really hated that freaking but but I finished the damn thing because I did not want to give the shitty book the satisfaction of beating me.

My point of that little rant is that even book considered great by the majority of the world (as 'The Time Traveler's Wife' has won awards and is praised by many), people can dislike something. So I really do understand where you're coming from with your dislike of 'The Hunger Games'. I just can't see the writing as that bad for myself, especially in comparison to 'The Time Traveler's Wife'. Was there something else that bothered you? Because, as I said, I have seen dozens of people online complain about the writing style but I never saw anything in the YA trilogy that bothered me as it has bothered everyone else.

[van.livejournal.com]

I've not read The Time Traveler's Wife, though saying "You think this is bad? You should read [Unrelated Thing]!" isn't going to win you any arguments. I did get used to the writing style eventually, but for me it just felt like sloppy, juvenile writing, not "omg we are in Katniss's head!!" Your mileage may vary, of course. I'm also not fond of first person narrative, so I have an instant knee-jerk reaction to stories with it as I find they're usually so poorly done. (Not always, however, I stress. I just finished some Heinlein which was in first person and it didn't bother me at all; a true feat.)

As I said in my initial reply, I didn't think the HG was bad, but it didn't feel especially new or original or amazing. Perhaps I'm just one of those annoying fans who read and saw "Battle Royale" 10 years ago and found this to be mostly a rehash of that. Different in many areas, of course, but I went into the HG knowing NOTHING about the story, and was like "...." within the first few chapters because it was like something I'd read 10 years ago. Not that anything is new under the sun, but it definitely negatively affected me vs. the way it might've been for someone who'd never heard / read / seen Battle Royale.

I did still read the book, and even enjoyed it, but for me it was hard to get into. I wasn't interested in Katniss or Peeta at all. The characters I was interested in were all other tributes, and I knew that meant they were going to die, so it was hard to let myself feel very much for them or grow attached. All in all, I think it's a great book for YA readers to read and enjoy. I can see why it appeals to some older audiences, and I'm all for books that get kids to read. It just sort of baffles me to see 30-year-olds flailing about it, or looking at the huge following growing up around it. It's enjoyable, sure. Maybe it's even "deserves to be turned into a movie" enjoyable, but EVERYONE flailing about how OMGAMAZING it is has left me scratching my head.

Probably my standards are too high from reading more quality literature, and probably my expectations were raised too high from all the hype.

[lit-wolf.livejournal.com]

I didn't offer up 'Time Traveler's Wife' to win any arguments. I offered it up to say that I understood where you were coming from in the thought process of 'Why does everyone keep praising was I see as garbage'. I wasn't trying to offer up a title as a 'there are worse things out there' defense.

And I have to say that if you don't like first person narrative, then your opinion is biased off the bat. That would be like a friend taking me to the concert of a rapper (and I can't stand rap) and then asking me afterwards what I thought. Of course I'm going to have negative things to say about it because I already hated rap.

I'm sorry you appear to be getting bombarded by excited fans but every fandom has them. Twilight, Harry Potter, Eragon, His Dark Materials, all fandoms have their crazy fans. Try not to let the fans put you out so much.