[ SECRET POST #2016 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2016 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 03 pages, 065 secrets from Secret Submission Post #288.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[dancing_serpent]

I loved it dearly up to the point where she seemed to cave to reader's demands and started to hurry up and move forward with the plot.

The first half of the current chapters really take their time, and it's beyond awesome - I think it's exactly the way an author should do it when she wants to get her readers to understand why a character undergoes so drastic changes: it's all there slowly developing from chapter to chapter.

But then then the reviews turned into a constant stream of "we've spent X chapters on the beach, just move on already", and there were RL time-eaters on the author's part, and now she takes rather large leaps with each chapter that leave people thinking/guessing even when they've recently re-read all the earlier chapters.

Anyway, I still think of it as one of my two favourite fics in A:TLA fandom.