[ SECRET POST #2111 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2111 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Comments

[szaleniec1000]

If you must use an epithet, there's no reason at all for not choosing one that makes sense in the context of the scene. If you write an epithet that doesn't fit the way the viewpoint character is currently thinking of the referent, then the reader is no longer in their head and this is distracting.

[(Anonymous)]

+1

The proper context can even add to a scene (for instance, "friend").

[(Anonymous)]

Yes, absolutely. I probably didn't express this very well in the secret, but I agree.