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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2012-12-05 05:21 pm

[ SECRET POST #2164 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2164 ⌋

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 02 pages, 044 secrets from Secret Submission Post #309.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.
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Re: Editing Advice?

[personal profile] citrinesunset 2012-12-06 07:48 am (UTC)(link)
I'm an over-writer, too, and I find that helps me get my thoughts together and get everything down.

If your story is progressing to the point where it needs to go, then I wouldn't worry too much about writing too much right now. You can trim stuff later. If you feel like you're getting too far off-course from the plot, then it may help to take a step back and figure out where the story needs to go and what needs to happen in order for it to get there.

I read a quote once in a writing book that basically said that the rough draft is for what you want to say, and subsequent drafts are for how you want to say it. While I do edit while I write, I like looking at it like that. When I edit, I go scene by scene and try to decide what the story needs, what details help the story, and what can be trimmed or said in a better way. Sometimes in my rough draft, I'll spend four paragraphs saying something that only needs one paragraph. But if I didn't write all four paragraphs, I might not know what I really want to say.