[ SECRET POST #2171 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2171 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I don't know. Fanfic smut and mainstream smut seem too different to compare in such a way. What's considered "good" on erotic fanfiction is almost the opposite of in mainstream erotica -- the "good" smutfic I've read all seems to be coy, artsy, almost squeamish in its refusal to be explicit, avoiding doing so by just using "tightness" and "inside" and rambling stream-of-consciousness because ultimately it's the characters and their relationship the readers to it in the first place. Readers of mainstream erotica -- I'm thinking mainly ebooks because that's where commercial smut is booming -- just don't want that.

[(Anonymous)]

I don't know what smutfic you are reading...

[(Anonymous)]

Really? I've read plenty of explicit smut, but the kind that is consistently touted as "good" always seems to be vague and artsy. When I have read non-fanfic erotica I have been pretty surprised at how explicit it is in comparison to the "he pushed into him" dancing-around that fanfic commonly does.

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da

i guess it varies by fandom (or the age of the fanfic writers)? i've seen fic like you describe, but also tons of fics that don't dance around the issue