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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2012-12-17 07:26 pm

[ SECRET POST #2176 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2176 ⌋

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Re: Let's talk about dialogue!

[personal profile] ypsilon42 2012-12-18 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah as the anon above said, I think the most important thing is, that it has to feel like a normal conversation.

The last time I was really actively annoyed be the dialog (in something that wasn't a bad fanfic), was when I was "The Dark Knight Rises". I remember sitting in the theater and thinking that no one would ever talk like that. They weren't so much having conversations, than giving speeches to each other.

(Though I have to say, I only saw it in German. It's possible that parts of that came from bad translation.)