[ SECRET POST #2176 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2176 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Let's talk about dialogue!

[tellytubby101]

I actually read aloud my dialogue, normally once the scene or exchange is finished. It helps to a remarkable degree to hear the words and helps me catch odd-sounding phrases or when the dialogue begins to get too long or OOC.

It also helps if I put myself in the mindset of each character speaking. Like, would a gruff, reserved character phrase that sentence so affectionately? Should I add in any adverbs or adjectives to clarify how they are speaking? I think of how it sounds aloud - the tone, the pauses, etc. - and try to convey that to the reader.