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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2012-12-17 07:26 pm

[ SECRET POST #2176 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2176 ⌋

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Re: Let's talk about dialogue!

[personal profile] tabaqui 2012-12-18 05:53 am (UTC)(link)
Man, this. In any fic where suddenly one character sounds like Dr. Drew or the 'The More You Know' guy or....whatever. I hate that.

Good dialogue is stuff that sounds like my family/friends are talking. The kind of stuff that starts here but then goes there and there and there, and people are quoting books and movies, and acting like idiots, and insulting each other, and stopping in the middle of an argument to 'pass the potatoes, please'.....

I dunno. Obviously not *exactly* like my family/friends, but that kind of thing.