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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2013-02-04 06:41 pm
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[ SECRET POST #2225 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2225 ⌋

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silverr: abstract art of pink and purple swirls on a black background (Default)

[personal profile] silverr 2013-02-05 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
But see, in the context of your novel I can see where "the putting on of shoes" could have been leveraged into a symbolic action (aka "girding the loins" which, heh heh, doesn't happen in modern times much). ~
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[personal profile] inkdust 2013-02-05 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
I am definitely going to think of it like that now :D thank you
silverr: abstract art of pink and purple swirls on a black background (LC shion)

[personal profile] silverr 2013-02-05 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
.. and while I don't know what your commune character(s) are like, the whole play on "walking in another's shoes" could come into play, perhaps?

in short: don't always take what your beta readers say as Incontrovertible Truth. It's almost always a good starting point, but sometimes it's just off-base. :p
Edited 2013-02-05 01:13 (UTC)
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