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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2013-02-04 06:41 pm

[ SECRET POST #2225 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2225 ⌋

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Secrets Left to Post: 04 pages, 084 secrets from Secret Submission Post #318.
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Re: I'm with ya OP

(Anonymous) 2013-02-05 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
Agree with you on this. If you're going to the effort of describing them taking off each article of clothing separately, you need to mention every article of clothing. (Particularly agree with you about the underwear thing. If the characters take off their "pants" but there's no mention of their underpants, I get so confused about "Wait, was that the American usage of pants or the British? Is he standing there naked or just minus trousers?" And then I have to scroll back up to check. But then, I think that's less a problem with the writing and more a problem with me, to be honest)