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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2013-03-01 07:05 pm

[ SECRET POST #2250 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2250 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

01.
[Stan Lee]


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03.
[Pusher II]


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04.
[nigahiga]


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06.
[code lyoko evolution]


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10. [SPOILERS for Homestuck]



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11. [SPOILERS for Kuroko no Basket]



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12. [WARNING for rape]



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13. [WARNING for abuse]



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14. [WARNING for rape]

[SNSD/Girls' Generation]


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15. [WARNING for dub-con]



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16. [WARNING for sexual assault]

[One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest]


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 00 pages, 000 secrets from Secret Submission Post #321.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 1 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 1 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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Re: WHICH IS CORRECT?

(Anonymous) 2013-03-02 01:23 am (UTC)(link)
That second example is incorrect. It should be:

"Senpai," Moe-tan caught her breath, "you forgot your bento."

OR

"Senpai," Moe-tan caught her breath. "You forgot your bento."
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Re: WHICH IS CORRECT?

[personal profile] mekkio 2013-03-02 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
I stand corrected. Still, I stand by the need to drop the "said" to make it flow better.
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Re: WHICH IS CORRECT?

[personal profile] inkdust 2013-03-02 03:55 am (UTC)(link)
Agreed. For the most realistic sequence I would have:
"Senpai!" Don't remember the name caught her breath. "You forgot your bento."