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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2013-03-15 06:46 pm

[ SECRET POST #2264 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2264 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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[Criminal Minds, Dharma & Greg]


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[Teen Wolf/Colton Haynes]


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[Alex and Emma Watson]


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[Anthony Bourdain and Guy Fieri]


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[World of Warcraft]


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[Kuroko no Basket]


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[Les Miserables]


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[Psycho Pass]


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[Journey Into Mystery]


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15. [SPOILERS for Buffy]



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16. [SPOILERS for Spartacus]
[WARNING for rape]



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17. [WARNING for child abuse]
http://oi46.tinypic.com/25akho2.jpg
[Kuroshitsuji; linked for (obvious) child abuse, animated]


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18. [WARNING for incest]

[Revolution]


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19. [WARNING for rape/abuse]

[Assassin's Creed 3]


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 00 pages, 000 secrets from Secret Submission Post #323.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 1 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Porn-writing advice, please?

(Anonymous) 2013-03-16 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
So I'm writing this sex scene, and it's all going okay for the most part. One of them's getting off because the other guy's giving him a blowjob, and the other guy's getting off the sound of his own name. It makes sense in context.

But I initially included the detail that Guy B could feel Guy A's pulse against his tongue (and liked it), and now I'm side-eying it. Is this hot or creepy, F!S?

(It's in character, but that's much less of a concern at the moment.)

Re: Porn-writing advice, please?

(Anonymous) 2013-03-16 04:52 am (UTC)(link)
Not creepy, and hot if it's not literally written "A could feel B's pulse on his tongue, and it was nice."

Re: Porn-writing advice, please?

(Anonymous) 2013-03-16 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
Awesome, thanks for the input! (And, lol, no, it's not. If I ever write something like that feel free to smack me upside the head.)