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⌈ Secret Post #2317 ⌋

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Comments

Sexy writing?

[(Anonymous)]

I am trying to write porn, but I just got to the first sex scene and kind of froze up. It's not as if I haven't done this before but I can't seem to get in the mood. Help? Please? Maybe we can make this a fantasy/kink sharing thread?

Re: Sexy writing?

[(Anonymous)]

What kind of sex scene? Het, slash, femslash? Are they first-time w/each other or first time w/that gender or are they in a relationship or just sexually experienced?

There's BDSM, pegging, collars, d/s, bloodplay, painplay, playing w/toys, etc.

Re: Sexy writing?

[(Anonymous)]

Femslash, in an established relationship, and very experienced with each other. This scene is fairly vanilla and I have the mechanics of it all worked out, I just seem to be afraid to actually continue.

Re: Sexy writing?

[(Anonymous)]

Yeah, writers are their own harshest critics. Just remember, no one's reading it but you and there's a delete button or you can fade to black if it's not a PWP.

Want fic recs? Fandom? Pairing?

I've been reading a lot of Avengers fic myself. I've found some bdsm fics that really do it for me in the fandom (even written by BDSM real life practitioners) like http://archiveofourown.org/series/29050 by Shaenie. It's steve/tony and what 50 shades wishes it was.

I like fics that involve emotional description as well as physical--just physical is boring to me. I like fics that are more d/s oriented since I love the exploration of subspace and topspace (although that's much rarer).

I like fics where one character drops the other one to their knees, so they're kneeling at their feet, looking up at them, making eye contact. Collars are nice here and the dom(me) hooks a finger through it controlling the sub actions. Telling them what to do.

Unzipping their pants/skirt with their teeth. Placing their mouth on their cock and deepthroating them or licking her pussy until she's had multiple orgasms. I like dirty talk where the top/dom/one controlling the action (let's just call them the dom) tells the sub what to do, what their fantasies are, how they're gonna fuck them next time.

I like where she dances her approval. I like the slow removal of clothes and where she's naked, but her domme is still clothes/minimally exposed. I like (sometimes) erotic spanking. Ever see Secretary w/James Spader (it's a BDSM love story movie, not explicit, but lovely); it has a nice spanking scene it w/the both of them clothed.

Re: Sexy writing?

[(Anonymous)]

This is ridiculously vanilla, but I really like when one character is holding the other while they they masturbate, just teasing them with light touches and dirty talk, eventually taking care of their own needs once their lover is really getting into themselves.

Bonus surprise mutual masturbation is also great, or a helping hand getting repaid with oral is always nice.

Consensual humiliation in a public place.

Um, yeah. I just like hands and mouths a lot.

Re: Sexy writing?

[(Anonymous)]

You might like this one. :) Handjob at the breakfast table.

http://archiveofourown.org/works/624137