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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2013-05-09 07:11 pm

[ SECRET POST #2319 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2319 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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[The Slum Cat - Ernest Seton Thompson]


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[Mass Effect]


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[The Hunger Games]


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[Ib]


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[Family Guy]


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[The West Wing]


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[Labyrinth]


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 01 pages, 016 secrets from Secret Submission Post #331.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

(Anonymous) 2013-05-11 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
I don't think it's that unfair.

Yes, they did their research for the era. I will give that to them, they were able to flesh a world out very well. But they're characterizations, unless they were the two leads, fell extemely flat for me. It felt like so many different things were put in the making, so many different possible storylines with different characters, and then the next page came out and it was a day later. I honestly don't think that the writer has the ability to flesh out secondary characters.

Which is why, when Banquo was killed, the story fell apart, because they had so many secondary characters out there, that could have filled in the gap, but they had spent no time working on them. Thus Johnny comes in cocksure, and we're left going 'who is he?!' The reader doesn't know, thus I was unable to connect.