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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2013-06-22 03:41 pm

[ SECRET POST #2363 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2363 ⌋

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Re: Have you ever written poetry?

(Anonymous) 2013-06-22 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah but it's shit and I didn't edit it and you can really obviously tell what poets I'd been reading a lot of recently but w/e

Try to fix the memory in your mind.
Try to take down the image,
Flatten it, force a nail through it
And spread it down on the surface of your mind.

What is the image then?
Bright sun low in the blue afternoon sky
Reflecting off the sea off into the distance.
The sound of the waves winning out over
Anything else, the rest of the world gone
A few birds float over, a few people
Wander up and down the beach. You
Just walk up and down and try to
Take everything in. Remember it now
Call up the image in your mind
Try to remember what it felt like
Now that the feeling is gone:
Not just the image, but what it was LIKE.

Can't be done; the moment exists once
And only once, but we still try
To hold within our minds
The experience, the beauty, the feeling
The sun suspended over the waves
Which stretch out and out forever into the distance
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Re: Have you ever written poetry?

[personal profile] dethtoll 2013-06-22 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
It could use some sprucing up, sure, but I like what you've done here. :)