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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2013-06-22 03:41 pm

[ SECRET POST #2363 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2363 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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making_excuses: (Default)

Re: Have you ever written poetry?

[personal profile] making_excuses 2013-06-22 09:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, and oh God they suck, but here goes:

Lost worlds and lost words
Smiles forgotten and
Lies told to often

Lessons learnt and lessons earned
Lost possessions and
Forgotten expressions

And one of my actual real poems, not the ones I write to make my mind stop... If I can find a finished draft, I write everything by hand and sometimes I do get around to rewriting them other times not so much, that is the first one I found. I probably have something better somewhere? Or probably not, anyway here goes:

To my ex,

Love, the word I know the
Definition of, though,
not the feeling
A loving hand or word

I don't think I ever
Loved you
Not completely,
I never learnt how

I liked you, well enough
Though, not enough
To stay forever
I know I said I would

I saw a future
The one with us
and the one with me
I made my choice

I choose to leave you
Leave our future
Maybe I shouldn't have?
I could have tried harder

Sometimes I am selfish,
I am scared that I am
Always selfish
That is the way it has to be

dethtoll: (Default)

Re: Have you ever written poetry?

[personal profile] dethtoll 2013-06-22 10:16 pm (UTC)(link)
That first one reminds me a lot of Ulver's lyrical structures. This is a good thing. :)