[ SECRET POST #2364 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2364 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Hnnn......that's a start but honestly if I were critiquing it as a story....I would probably suggest more. (I usually put in at least 9) .


But eh that's what works for me. I just think 3 is a little light. Also naivite is a tough thing to pass as a flaw because well...it has to actually cause trouble. If it doesn't do anything bad for her...it just sounds a lot like "too nice" or "too innocent".

That said my memories of CCS are pretty good and I remember liking it so...*shrug*. Different tastes.