[ SECRET POST #2433 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2433 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 03 pages, 073 secrets from Secret Submission Post #348.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 1 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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Comments

Re: Question for the hive mind.....

[(Anonymous)]

I like a slow build in stories, but it also depends on what happens in the story until they actually meet. If it actively feels like the author is stalling and there isn't actually a lot of plot to fill all that space, I grow bored and would probably think twice about continuing to read it.

Re: Question for the hive mind.....

[tabaqui]

It's actual plot, showing the hows and whys of a character and giving a solid background so that you *get* why they are as they are later.

Re: Question for the hive mind.....

[(Anonymous)]

In that case, I don't see a problem. On the contrary, even - too many fics go from "Oh I just met you" two "let's fuck and be eternally in love" in under two seconds, and that's annoying.

Re: Question for the hive mind.....

[tabaqui]

I hate that. Hate it in fic, hate it on tv, hate it in movies.