[ SECRET POST #2437 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2437 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 1 - not!secrets ], [ 1 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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Comments

Re: Inspired by #10

[(Anonymous)]

Fics that add in waaaay too much that doesn't need to be there, either in dialogue or just in general.

Because, if I'm forced to sit through a mass of scenes that isn't related to the plot? It's going to make me wonder what the plot actually *is* and if the writer even knows what the plot is*.

With dialogue I just...really, really don't like the hammed up over the top stuff a lot of people do because they don't know like how 'snipped and to-the-point most dialogue is!" [Or something along those lines is reason I've mostly seen.]

Too much of either? I quit reading.

*This doesn't apply to stuff that ends up relating to the plot later on, of course

Re: Inspired by #10

[kaijinscendre]

Ah yes. All that purple prose stuff. That was really big in LOTR fanfics if I recall.

Re: Inspired by #10

[(Anonymous)]

I didn't actually mean purple prose [though that *is* pretty damn annoying]. I meant more stuff like the author adding in a huge back story ["Because I really like it!"] or a long speech that's out of place, you know?

The former feels like a bait and switch when it happens and that latter...idk. I just really hate long speeches XD;;