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fandomsecrets2013-10-17 06:53 pm
[ SECRET POST #2480 ]
⌈ Secret Post #2480 ⌋
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(Sabrina the Teenage Witch)
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[Vampire: the Masquerade- Bloodlines]
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(Anonymous) 2013-10-18 02:27 am (UTC)(link)no subject
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The dialog is fine, but the plotting is incredibly sloppy. Lots of hand-waving of big issues. And the biggest problem is Liz, the female lead. YMMV, but she is a TERRIBLE agent, and it really takes me out of the story. She's obviously supposed to be the moral center and strong (although a fish out of water), but she comes off as clueless and incompetent more often than not.
I enjoy Spader a lot, so I'm still watching. I just hope they live up to the potential there instead of continuing to have Liz tag around after him like a baby duck. Strong, competent, professional women do not have to lose those qualities to be in difficult/traumatic/confusing/etc situations.
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