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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2013-11-13 06:38 pm

[ SECRET POST #2507 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2507 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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fingalsanteater: (Default)

This isn't iambic pentameter, but nice try.

[personal profile] fingalsanteater 2013-11-14 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
You did it. You bastard, you did it.

Oh, and I would respond in kind, but my brains kind of mush. See my rap from the other night if you want poetry.
Edited 2013-11-14 00:57 (UTC)
cyber_chaps: (amber has a hat)

[personal profile] cyber_chaps 2013-11-15 08:04 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, some of it is imabic. First two lines are fine, but 'said' isn't a very strong word for a stressed beat, and 'no one' in the fourth line is clearly a trochee. So is 'Wanking,' among others, but obviously who cares.

Also can't be iambic pentameter if there aren't five feet in each line.

I know this is a day late and totally unnecessary but I never get to talk about the stupid shit I learned in poetry class OK.