[ SECRET POST #2576 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2576 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Your Storytelling Pet Peeves

[(Anonymous)]

Oh, and, "X smelled like cigarettes and ash," or "Y tasted of strawberries". Like, what? That's invariably inserted out of nowhere. If they smoke or if they've been eating strawberries, and then only if it belongs in the story.

It sounds terribly romantic when people insert random aromas, but the smell of cigarettes or whatever isn't usually realistic, let alone arousing. People just smell like themselves.