[ SECRET POST #2665 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2665 ⌋

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Comments

[caecilia]

Sure, but saying "This was painful to read." isn't a critique. Sometimes I do have to say that (and more!) to someone because it's not healthy to keep your feelings bottled in! But I say it to a friend or to my journal. It wouldn't be helpful to the author and it would reflect badly on me as a critic. In my workshop (and I agree with this method) you have to say something positive about the story. A lot of people tend to go overboard with the praise, but I keep it short and to the point, and then I tell them in a professional way what wasn't done well and why.

[(Anonymous)]

This this this. "This was painful to read, and here's why I say that" is critique. "This was painful to read", with nothing following it up, is unhelpful and mean-spirited if you direct it at the author.

Unless you're not trying to be helpful and just want to make fun of fic you don't like, but I'm personally glad fandom's typically giving up that habit.

[(Anonymous)]

I'd argue that even then, it isn't necessarily useful critique, as "painful to read" is very much subjective opinion. Focusing on critiquing in terms of "this element did/didn't work, here's why" is often a lot more helpful, since it takes it out of the realm of pure personal opinion.