[ SECRET POST #2692 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2692 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Concrit this shit, yo!

[(Anonymous)]

Throwing a few quick comments on the top one (I don't know the fandom, though...)

From the expressions, wardrobe, and general poses, I definitely get a sense of the characters, even without knowing who they are (cocksure vs. timid/practical). The action's uncertain to me, though, mostly because of the legs; the figure on the left looks like he's backing up and the figure on the right like he's slowly walking forward, which runs counter to what their upper bodies say.

If they're to be standing, their weight should look more planted. eg left guy: over-exaggeration of the curve of his right shin through to his foot -> his foot is farther forward than expected, weight doesn't really "sit" anywhere -> his lean back looks mid-pose.

Also left guy rib cage looks seated a bit far back; abs should fit under the curve of the cage, and pecs are on top of it.

Clothing looks good, and color choices are nice.