[ SECRET POST #2751 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2751 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 02 pages, 043 secrets from Secret Submission Post #393.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ], [ 1 - tar fields, I assume. No more linking after this. If you want to play a character, do it in the Games thread or a roleplay community, please ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

TW: ehiblophile character

[jaybie_jarrett]

I hope you don't me asking a related question OP.

(more in the linked comment)

Re: TW: ehiblophile character

[jaybie_jarrett]

Are there any ways I can find for a character to describe certain characters as attractive or "pretty" in a way that is...kinda offsetting in disturbing but can still be subtle . The character is an adult character who has an attraction to teen boys.

The way she describes them is supposed to come across creepy to the reader but something that people might not notice. Like the reader can tell that she has a thing for these boys the way she does it but she denies and does it in a way that other people just ignore or assume is some quirk of hers.

What words would she use. I mean I get SOME ideas from reading books like Twilight and seeing how they describe characters sorta (because Meyer's descriptions come off as creepy to me) any other ideas?

Re: TW: ehiblophile character

[feotakahari]

This is an interesting one. Mind if I make a thread about it on a writing site? (I won't specify your username if you don't want.)

Re: TW: ehiblophile character

[jaybie_jarrett]

Oh sure. I don't mind if you specify my name or not. (although the creeper character is not the protagonist, she's the villain, the story just covers multiple points of view)

I just want some feedback on this. Thanks.

(I kinda want to just have the reader sort of unnerved by her descriptions. and maybe sort of the feeling of "she should not be thinking about boys that young like that")

Re: TW: ehiblophile character

[feotakahari]

I made the thread. I'll see how it goes. http://mythicscribes.com/forums/brainstorming-and-planning/12537-making-your-pov-character-creepy-unsettling.html#post174861

Re: TW: ehiblophile character

[jaybie_jarrett]

Hmm I just got a username there and everything but it still won't let me view that thread...any reason why.

Re: TW: ehiblophile character

[feotakahari]

Dang, I forgot newbies don't get access to some forums. (I think the rule is five posts before you can access.) I can check back in tomorrow and tell you what they said.

Re: TW: ehiblophile character

[jaybie_jarrett]

okay cool sounds good. You can PM it to me if you want.

Re: TW: ehiblophile character

[jaybie_jarrett]

Oh okay *takes note* Thank you. Those will help.