[ SECRET POST #2770 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2770 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 03 pages, 054 secrets from Secret Submission Post #396.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

Re: What WIP do you want to finish?

[feotakahari]

An original work called Three Heartbeats. It's about the ghost of a girl who died in a car crash, who tries to arrange a romance between her boyfriend and a new girl so that she can move on with no regrets. Then the new girl falls in love with the mysterious young woman who appears in her dreams, and everything goes topsy-turvy.

I tried writing part of it, was told that what I thought was a cute fluffy sex scene had seriously rapey undertones, and was so horrified I haven't been able to write any sort of sex scene since. (I don't think this story can work without sex, so . . .)

Re: What WIP do you want to finish?

[(Anonymous)]

Any chance for a link? It sounds quite interesting.

Re: What WIP do you want to finish?

[nyxelestia]

Eh, other people's perceptions can be screwed, and maybe you can use that as an opportunity to figure out how to write cute, fluffy sex-scenes without rapey undertones.

I had similar issues after people told me how "romantic" a sex scene/smut fic was, a scene which was very dub-con, bordering on outright non-con. I spent ages not writing sex (either good sex or bad/dub-/non-con) due to that, but eventually got around to using that as a starting point to try and make sexual intentions more obvious. :)

Definitely sounds like an intriguing story!

Re: What WIP do you want to finish?

[slr2moons]

I'm thirding the interest in your WIP! If you could share a link for what you have up, I'd love to read it. And if you'd like, give you input on any potential non-con, too. C: