[ SECRET POST #2790 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2790 ⌋

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Well, yes, she's badly written--but she's badly written in a specific way: she's transparently a narcissistic wish-fulfillment of the author, who's in the story either to show other characters up, or to be an object of pity.

[cabler]

I meant that most people forget it, and focus too much about the "good at things", "looks good" and "has sad history" parts- a character can have all of these and still not be a Mary Sue, but the "badly written" part is what ties it all together.

[(Anonymous)]

For me, it boils down to how the other characters react to our potential M. Sue. Does it make sense, within the context of the book/show/whatever, for the other mains to react to the character in that way? There are some other issues too, like "does the character ever make mistakes, and if so, does the writer allow them to actually be mistakes," but that can be a little less cut and dry.

[(Anonymous)]

Does the character ever make mistakes, and if so, does the writer allow them to actually be mistakes?

AYRT

Agreed on that.