[ SECRET POST #2812 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2812 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 02 pages, 047 secrets from Secret Submission Post #402.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

Re: Factual Errors in Otherwise Great Fics...

[(Anonymous)]

I don't have a link, but I once read a fic where the author described the hymen as being inside the vaginal canal. Like, deep enough in that the woman could be fingered without the guy touching it (he was described as coming up against it and then backing off so that he wouldn't break it and make her not a virgin). That's so ridiculously wrong that it was actually offensive to me. I wrote a review that was like "that's not where the hymen is," and then I stopped reading completely.

Re: Factual Errors in Otherwise Great Fics...

[(Anonymous)]

SA

Oh, I should add that the fic was fine and quite enjoyable up until the sex scene.

Re: Factual Errors in Otherwise Great Fics...

[(Anonymous)]

It wouldn't stop me from reading (unless it was a plot critical detail) but I never know how to respond to things like this when it's clear the author has worked so hard on the fic. And instead of showing appreciation, I feel like I'm just poking at the few bruises that, in the grand scheme of things, don't really mar an otherwise excellent piece of fiction.

Re: Factual Errors in Otherwise Great Fics...

[(Anonymous)]

Oh man, I've come across that one more than once. Like the guy will pause during penetration before he pushes past 'the final barrier'.