[ SECRET POST #348 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #348 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 04 pages, 100 secrets from Secret Submission Post #050.
Secrets Not Posted: 0 broken links, 0 not!secrets, 0 not!fandom, [ 1 2 ] repeats, [ 1 ] too big.
Next Secret Post: Tomorrow, Thursday, December 20th, 2007.
Current Secret Submission Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[coloredink.livejournal.com]

I'm going to have to disagree on the point that a drabble "cannot" be complete. I think the key is to find a story that only needs to be 100 words long, or that can survive the given constraints. Of course, ah ha ha ha, this is quite the challenge in itself.

A while back, there was a "six word stories" meme running around. One of the most amazing stories I've ever read was one of the examples used for this meme: "For sale: baby shoes, slightly used." I would not call this incomplete. I think it somehow manages to convey a--very tragic, heartbreaking--story in only six words.

One of my writing instructors once passed on a piece of wisdom that her mentor gave her: Every sentence must have three reasons to be there. This may be an impossible goal, she said, but in reaching for it, you'll at least find two reasons for every sentence to be there, and that alone makes your writing more powerful.

I write drabbles for practice, not to get myself past a block or help me flesh out an idea, but because when I have only 100 words, every word has to mean something. There is no room for superfluousness in a drabble. All my drabbles so far have pretty much sucked, but I hope I'll get there someday.

[forchancookie.livejournal.com]

I find that most, if not all, of these drabbles leave so many questions behind, they're just incomplete.

Even the example you've provided, which is a famous piece from Hemingway, leaves so much unsaid. It hints at a story, but I cannot feel that it is a story in and of itself.

That's kind of how I feel about drabbles. They're hints at bigger pictures, but you only get that little drop and it's not enough to refresh your thirst, therefore I can't see it as a whole.