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fandomsecrets2007-12-23 05:56 pm
case) wrote in fandomsecrets2007-12-23 05:56 pm
[ SECRET POST #352 ]
⌈ Secret Post #352 ⌋
Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.
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Notes:
Secrets Left to Post: 10 pages, 250 secrets from Secret Submission Post #051.
Secrets Not Posted: 0 broken links, 0 not!secrets, 0 not!fandom, [ 1 2 3 ] too big, [ 1 ] hate letter.
Next Secret Post: Tomorrow, Monday, December 24th, 2007.
Current Secret Submission Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.
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If you think posting crit to a secrets community anonymously rather than giving it to her as a comment or even in private, then I don't think you're really one to give crit at all. Either own up to it or move on, people are more likely to listen if they sense you're not being rude about it or have some integrity--and in case you're wondering, this displays neither.
As for the picture itself, there ARE some VERY obvious issues with anatomy that isn't automatically forgiven by style and could stand be corrected (honestly, that's a really annoying excuse I see given by fans and artists alike; stylization is an an explanation to a certain degree, but there's a line you eventually cross where it's just chalked up to plain ol' mistakes or clumsiness), but your redlining isn't very clear either, nor does it display enough (I'd have included some pointers on her neck, arm, shoulders and clothing forming on the body). A redline should also be accompanied with explanations as to why you redlined what you did in the first place (which you have for the head but lack for everything else). If you are going to provide a redline, please keep these things in mind.
Lastly, like everyone said, if that is "so overwheight it's depressing," it's your standards I think that are the most depressing.