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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2015-01-19 07:55 pm

[ SECRET POST #2938 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2938 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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[Constantine]


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[Dragon Age]


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[Merlin]


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[Pokemon]


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[The Americans]


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[Doctor Who]


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[Twisted Toyfare]


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[Black Books]


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[World of Warcraft]













Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 02 pages, 046 secrets from Secret Submission Post #420.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

(Anonymous) 2015-01-20 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
That's the one. I'll always have fond memories of the first two thirds of that fic.

Then there was the sex scene. By that stage, I trusted the writer to be able to handle it. They could not.

I remember even re-reading that chapter in amazement, thinking I must have missed something. I'd seen certain elements coming from the writer's foreshadowing. All those elements were there as I'd expected in this scene. Just not tied together in any way that was credible.

I understand some people have this kink and a scene like that might hit the spot - but as a porny standalone fic, not in the middle of an otherwise well-written story. What's the point of setting up characters for 100k words only to have them act so bizarrely unlike themselves?

But then, Pokemon is a fandom known for its pointless rape fics. At least this one was just human on human. It was only disappointing because the rest of the fic was so skilfully done.

Looking back, I get the feeling that this was one of those fics that grew from the idea for one sex scene and took on a larger life of its own. The only problem was, the characters had outgrown that sex scene by the time the writer had reached that point.